
The pizza
Reminds us
That no matter
How much we consume
We will never be full
All is transient
And wasted
In the tarmac
of life

The pizza
Reminds us
That no matter
How much we consume
We will never be full
All is transient
And wasted
In the tarmac
of life
This makes me a sad clown. :,0( Still very good though!
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There’s something inherently sad about all clowns. Like life itself. Help.
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I enjoy your piece for its satirical nature and feel engaged with your work, which I find very entertaining and enjoyable. I also like that you’ve kept the website updated with more pieces, all of which flow well. The piece drew me in well and maintained my attention, from the first line until the last. I enjoyed reading it for your humour and witty nature present in your work. I can’t think of anything to improve upon, other than perhaps to have pieces which range in length?
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